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"I've only lived 18 years, but I don't want to change any of them. They're all part of my life, even the failures." -Makise Kurisu
For this one I decided to put down the first paragraph of my opening. I went with the anecdote route because the day I talk about is a perfect example of the Three Good Things process. This was a day that a lot of stuff clicked for me and I was able to let go of stress.
It’s a Sunday night and I’m hanging out with my friends in my basement as usual. For some reason my friend Katie’s house was brought up and I’m going off on a tangent about the island that separates her family room from her small dinning room. I was talking about how it doesn’t make any sense because it completely closes off the room, it makes it near impossible to pull the chair at the dinning room table out far enough to be comfortable, and just went on and on. Mid rant my friend Eric jokingly says that I should just be an architect and I stopped mid-sentence. It was a like sitcom where one character says something that makes another character stop cold and everything they were wondering about and stressing over just clicked and they knew what to do next. Because of that one joke I am now changing my career path.
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Coleman Clark
11/19/2018 01:25:22 pm
Nice job in opening with a scene it was pretty well done. Is you story about you finding out what you want to do when you older? if so i'm interested to see how you tie it into the research paper. Nice Job!
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11/19/2018 03:52:37 pm
GREAT POST! What has been the hardest thing about writing this project so far? Is it content or the format that is the issue?
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Ryan Boyer
11/19/2018 08:15:39 pm
I like how you added a scene to the intro. Try looking at the thesis statement again.
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Nick D'AversaWriter, outstandingly good at mouthing along to songs, level 9 Dragonborn Blood Hunter, and just trying to figure out what in the hell I'm doing. Archives
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